The Price of Tradition

The Price of Tradition

Quietly, head ahead, walk away, 
vines will cover the wrecked path,
sensing the spite of endless wrath,  
silence swallows, despite our cries,
the unnameable calls for warmth.
Where are you, human condition?

Here, here, so lost, here tradition
holds your narrow vision as a lath.

How many more foes do we need
to realize that a narrow vision 
is what that truly makes us bleed?

No foe, break the lath, envision
the horizon that has been freed
from the ties of a dim tradition,
only the weak of spirit enforce
that which is meant to be free
from deadly ties, a bounded mind,
from empty lies, tradition's cries. 	            
The price of tradition is your own will, your mind’s freedom. Instead of blindly following a certain point of view, why don’t you question yourself if such tradition leads you to love or fear? If it takes you closer to fear, what is the point of living in fear? Why do you choose to follow such path if there is no love in it? What is the purpose of being bounded to tradition if you can’t experience the fullest, being yourself?
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  • carolan
    Sep 8th, 2013
    carolan says:

    your poetry is marvellous… but perhaps not use so many commas…they break up the flow…

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    1. Lina Ru Author
      Sep 9th, 2013
      Lina Ru says:

      The commas used in this poem modify the meaning. If I remove a comma, the meaning would be altered in such a way that my message could not be conveyed properly. However, I will take your suggestion to heart and try to measure my use of commas in other poems where the meaning is not affected. Thank you so much for your kind comment.

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